That was the day on which the Voices
spoke.
Still not understandable, losing
themselves in the past and their own words. Repeating fragments of
their previous statements. Reality and dream entwined with each
otcher with no sense. Despite this everybody came to listen.
Elders and kids. Hunters and gatherers.
They all stood together at the edge of The Forest afraid to
make even one little step further.
The Voices were with them always,
despite the fact that most of the tribe mambers have never heard them
until now, nobody ever questioned they existance. They just accepted
it like their ancestors did for ages.
A little boy with shining amethyst eyes
and short messy black hair was also listening. The forest had amazed
him for years. He wanted to walk deserted paths in the moonlight,
look at the sunlight filtering through the giant leafs, and admire
the animals: huge butterflies traveling over fields, snakes hanging
down from branches like colorful lianes. He felt as if The Forest
should be his home. But yet he was afraid, so afraid of what he
wanted to call home, of what he called his destiny. But more than
enything he was afraid of The Voices and The Forest was their
kingdom.
A boy with amethyst eyes have heard The
Voices every day. He never told anyone. If he did they would have
locked him down in a room with no exit. He would have become a slave
of his own abilities. He didn't want to. He would have to listen to
The Voices till his death, with no time for rest. In his village
there were three people with a gif, two man and one women. Trapped
inside a prison with no escape they soon went mad, becoming savage
and unpredictable. He didn't know for how long he could hide his
ability but he knew that if they find out it will be the end.
Suddenly a boy heard somebody calling
his name. It wasn't a voice of his mother nor one of his three
younger sisters. It was his voice, his own but a little bit more
mature. He wasnt a child anymore but this voice sounded like a voice
of a grown up person.
He heard it call him again and now he
identified exactly where it was coming from. It came from the front,
from The Forest. His amethyst eyes filled with fear and than
determination. He took one step forewars, and than one more. He heard
the silent whispers in the crowd behind him, and his mother shouting
his name but he didn't turn back. The Voices from The Forest were now
louder than ever, his name was spoken by thousends of beings. He had
enough, he wanted them to stop but they wouldn't. He made a decision
and with a few steps he managed to reach first trees. He heard
someone scream and than everything was comsumed by bright light. A
village at the edge of The Forest didn't exist anymore.
Nice writing! It's a good prologue, makes me really curious about the rest of the story.
ReplyDeleteWhen's the next part coming?
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Thank you for nice words. I hope you won't be disapointed. I don't know exactly when will be the next part but now that I see somebody is acually interested I will try to finish it as fast as I can. ;)
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